Under The Bed

Walt:We are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing.

Under The Bed

Bang!!! Bang!!! Fired a gun. I woke up. I rushed Down stairs hoping that my family was safe but My hopes were to low. “NOOOOOO!!!!!” I shouted. I'm starting to panic. “What do I do What do I do”. I said.  walking in circles. “No Mom no Dad”. I walk back to my bed wishing it was a dream. I get into my bed and close my eyes. All my thoughts fading away. I was just about to fall asleep but then i heard a noise coming from Under My Bed….. I jump of my bed to have a look. “Gotcha!!” I shouted. But nothing was there. What was that noise I said. I turn around to grab my phone to call my friend. I rang Jack. But then Something grabbed my leg and pulled and started to pull me Under The Bed. “Get Off Me Monster Thing!!!”. “Never!!” It said. Continuing to me Under The Bed. “Hello”. Said Jack. “Are you there Michael? I'm coming there to see if your alright”. He hung up had rushed to the hotel where Michael lived when we got to his house He was scared. He opened the door and saw jacks friends parents lying on the ground.”Oh No”. He powered through  the house trying to find Michael's room. “Help Me”. said Michael. “I'm coming” Jack said”. He found his room and dived on his arm starting to pull. “What's pulling you?”Said jack”. I don't know?”.Said. “Almost out”.Said Michael.

To Be Continued

This is work I have written and edited myself. It is still a work in progress

Question:Did you like my writing? What can i work on?

Reflection:It was hard finding out what to put under the bed .