Walt: We are learning to write scary stories.
Today Captain Undead was looking for dirty gold as usual. Then Captain Undead's mate Billy shouted “Look over there ,it's a beautiful island” Said Billy.”Spooky” Said Captain Undead ‘ Maybe we should explore!’ Said Billy ‘Yeah” Said Captain Undead. They walked into the island and got so scared that Captain Undead punched Billy and knocked him right out.Then ran into a branch and knocked himself out. But then the tree Said ‘Ha Ha Ha Ha’.
By Lincoln
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