Walt: we are learning to write creative writing .
Rudolph the rabbit and his elves were working none stop for Eastmas eve. Rudolph told his elves to build a rocket tree to hide kids presents. “The tree rocket is ready and so is Eastmas! “But there is not enough presents to hide”, Shouted Rudolph! Ohh wait the rocket tree! Quick make more presents”. 1 Hour later: It’s almost morning we have to deliver the presents. They delivered before morning , but at the last stop it was… Evil Jimmy's House. So they didn’t deliver presents to him! And then left to go back to the North Pole.
By Lincoln.
What could I have done differently in my Slide?
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