Happy Halloween

Walt: We are learning to write scary stories.

Today Captain Undead was looking for dirty gold as usual.  Then Captain Undead's mate Billy shouted “Look over there ,it's a beautiful island” Said Billy.”Spooky” Said Captain Undead ‘ Maybe we should explore!’ Said Billy ‘Yeah” Said Captain Undead. They walked into the island and got so scared that Captain Undead punched Billy and knocked him right out.Then ran into a branch and knocked himself out. But then the tree Said ‘Ha Ha Ha Ha’.

By Lincoln

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Hydroponic Art

Walt: We are learning to create Hydroponic Pallet gardens.

What was my favourite  part?

My favorite part was when I had to make a hydroponic pallet. This was my favourite part because I like doing the subject Arts and Crafts

What I could have done differently?

What I could have done differently was use a more stable pallet, because I  could make more room for plants.

What I found difficult?

What I found difficult was making my hydroponic art because I could not find any green.

What I could have done better?

What I could have done better is put longer pipes in because all of my pipes are really short and might miss the next layer.

By Lincoln

How could I improve my pallet garden?

Hydroponic System.

WALT: We are learning about Hydroponics.

Sorry about my picture, it is upside down .  :(

Why did I choose this design?

                                                                                                  

I choose this design because it can get sunlight on two sides all day. If it rains it will run down the whole area and feed the plants automatically. I also chose this design because it will stand without something to lean on. This design is too hard for birds to get the plants because it is tied to a broomstick.

Equipment list:                 

Pallet x2                           

Pipe x4             

Little ramp x3     

Broomstick x3

Wood x4             

Water bottle x5

Plants x5

By Lincoln                                                                                                   

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